|Reviews for rather here than atlanta|
| Setsuna529 chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
This is a really unique love poem... I like the lines "we were pressed a bit too tightly / we were pressed a bit for time."
| sunday night sky chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
I really love your work... i can really relate to it. i have thus added you to my fave authors list. i love the repetition of 'missed me' and how it is reflected at the beginning and the end of the piece. i also like these lines:
'we were pressed a bit too tightly
we were pressed a bit for time.'
fyi, the way you used the word 'pressed' is called a 'zeugma' or 'zeugmatic', (but u may already know that... i just want to show off the only big/unusual word i know :P lol) and it is very interesting if you're into geeky things like that :/
anyways, love this piece. will read more of your stuff as i like it a lot xx