I like your imagery and your use of vocabulary. I haven't seen anyone use the word plethora before except for me occasionally, and it's nice to see people use words to taste. So that's always a pleasure.

This poem feels like I'm entering a rapture, or a dream itself. The pace is set in slow motion which gives it that dream like quality. I didn't like any one specific stanza because I really enjoyed all of them.

Good beginning, good ending, and good purpose, it's all I could ask for in a poem.

This poem reminds me of sorrow, deep dark hidden sorrow.

It is a really remarkable piece.

Do write more like this one.

It really says alot about the author.

Good work.

-JoDanLeeAnn

your poem was like being inside a dream. that's good.

aw, I think the title is sweet, nice poem, it's a happy song by the way.