Reviews for The Holy Room
Naver chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
That makes perfect sense! :)
scarlet stars chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
Blunt, simplistic truth. Very nice.
Patrick-Henry chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
G-d. The honesty in that is incredible. Just, wow. Speechless.
Lady Alera Van Hexis chapter 1 . 9/5/2008
I really like this. I think that it is so simple and yet, wonderful. I would like to see it expanded out, but I think that the shortness of it gives it more impact.

Lovely as always my friend.


Lady Alera Van Hexis
your scripted romance chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
So short, and simple, but you hit me hard with this one. Nice work. I also wanted to take the opportunity to thank you for reviewing so much of my work - I'm going to do a better job of returning the favor from now on.
rouquinamour chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
interesting thoughts; maybe you should expand into a whole poem!
jojoba-music-girl chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
This is just amazing! So true and written so clearly. It's simple but also very touching. It's almost stunned me, which happens not very often.
Rose Valentine chapter 1 . 6/3/2008
Yes, the very concept itself is true. I've been wondering the same thing. A hospital can do such wonders.
East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 6/3/2008
that's an interesting POV. I'll have to tell that to my mom. I'd like it if you add a bit more detail. But, I really think that's an interesting POV.
lymli chapter 1 . 6/3/2008
aw that's sweet, but if you don't have money, doctors don't help you, but there are good doctors too.. well, good poem.