Reviews for Rule Number One: Don't Fall for the Hunter
lilleylove chapter 12 . 6/2/2012
Very good story but far to short... it didn't feel like the romance between Carlo and Jasmine had gone far enough...but it was still a good story with well developed plot and characters... and i definitely enjoyed your writing style
EvilSoul chapter 12 . 3/27/2012
An interesting story, I really enjoed reading it. The only thing I didn't like was the rushed ending. But anyway great story.
live 2oo write chapter 12 . 5/30/2010
Yay, Carlo seems really sexy and is the perfect match for Jasmine. I hope they end up together. :)
RaelynRayne chapter 12 . 2/18/2009
I rather enjoyed this one. Sad that it is finished, but definitely one of my faves.
Slightly Obsessive chapter 11 . 8/17/2008
Really liking this. The little differences from traditional vampire fics make it interesting!
Nephilim Familiar chapter 11 . 8/15/2008
love the story so keep up the great work and good luck on your future updates, I know it will be updates of quality :)

Sincerely Nephilim Familiar
kemi chapter 11 . 7/23/2008
wow

excellent story!I really like how Carlo and Jasmine are coming together...it really is a great story...lol. I just hope that they cand defeat the Aedilis in time (Dundundun!)BIG FAN

-kemi
dreamercrys chapter 10 . 7/6/2008
Woot! THey are finally all open with each ther. Now all they need to do is kiss and all will good...
Mayu-San-Sakura chapter 10 . 7/6/2008
Cool, update soon.
Mayu-San-Sakura chapter 9 . 6/30/2008
Update soon.
dreamercrys chapter 9 . 6/26/2008
Well dang if I was her and had a sexy vampire who wanted me nothing would be holding me back. Can't wait for the next chap.
Mayu-San-Sakura chapter 8 . 6/16/2008
The cop dude probably bugged the crime scene. Update soon.
dreamercrys chapter 8 . 6/12/2008
I think thats a cool ability. He shouldn't be embarassed.
dreamercrys chapter 7 . 6/11/2008
He's like a super vamp...isn't he?
Mayu-San-Sakura chapter 7 . 6/11/2008
Cool, update soon.
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