Reviews for Four More Years
J.N. Lloyd chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
Political poems are so strong, and the lack of faith in our government is a feeling felt by many now. Once there was a trust, but it has been broken so many times that it is unlikely to be rebuilt for decades to come. Sadly, we fought for this country to free oursleves from tyranny, but beacuse of our own greed and corruption, we have created our own damning inquisition. Your poem speaks in bounds, and I really connected with it.
Tytherpol chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
insincerity is magical. :)

beautiful poem.

"We can not defend nor befriend the intentful resentful corruption that we're choking on" -that should go in a quote book somewhere