Okay your main character is way too slutty for me. She's so annoying, and seems to have next to no brain. I thought this would be a story about a girl having had too many boyfriends being eased into having a New one a few years later, something sweet and Nice, and come out of this reading very disappointed.
I will not even read the ten following chapters as I can feel the clichés lowering my IQ already

I loved this story! :D The ending made me laugh! After all the trouble she's been through, Jordan shows up revealing that he'd lied? Poor Cassie XD

Ahhhh! I loved it so so much! Oh my gosh it was awesome. You should publish this! Seriously, I am not kidding.

Go Steven and Cassie! Woo! Lol :P

Thanks for an awesome read ;)

I feel so sorry for Cassie! She can't trust anyone with her heart anymore. Steven better not be cheating on her. Gosh, she deserves so much better!

Yes! Oh my gosh, I have been waiting for this moment ever since Steven arrived at their school. I wonder how Scott is going to act? Love it!

Ah-mazing!

Wow. Ethan, Steven and Scott like her? Can you call this a love square? lol LOVE it!

From Steven the nerd to Steven the gorgeous new student!

I wonder what Cassie is gonna do? Love it!

steven so reminds me of someone i know!

Hi Katie

I came accross your story by sheer luck, and I really liked it. It was sweet, and simple, but at the same time really moving.

You had some great character outlines, and you really fleshed out the charactes. they became real, which is always important in writing. I especially liked the charcter of Mia, she was real and funny, and epitomised the "best friend".

You kept your plot line nice and simple, with some lovely twists here nad there, just enough to keep the reader guessing, but not overdone (thus turning the story into a thriller!). It was really great.

I did think that some of the chapters ended rather abruptly. It was like they just..stopped, with no real reason or finality. I'm not referring to the "cliffhanger" endings. I'm sorry I can't be more specific abot which ones (I've forgotten) but it was towards the beginning.

As far as descriptional technique goes, you did it very subtly, allowing the reader to picture things with just the correct amount of detail. It was especially well done with regard to the interactions between Casie and her brother.

Overall, I really liked the story, and will try to read more of your stuff in future!

Zakeeya

I loved this story so much, you have to write a sequel! Please!

You have to do a sequel! Omg! Don't end it like this!

If you don't write a sequel, I might just cry.

Haha.

Your story was amazing.

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this SCREAMS sequel! :D

hahahahaha awesome story, I totally didn't expect the ending! :) Hope you do a sequel, I'll be checking out your other stories too! :)