Reviews for The Year Of Too Many Boys |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wow. this is to amazing. you seriously nailed the brother sister relationship perfectly. {it reminds me of my own.} im deff. gonna read the follwing chapters good job ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think Steven is Scott's stepbrother and maybe Scott already knows about her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter! Mia is exactly like Cassie describes... totally needy! LOL Hm, I guess we'll find out how much hooking up takes place in the next chapter! Katie :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story is really interesting. i like it a lot. udpate soon please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was good - there was just one moment of confusion: when she's trying to get out of the house, and her mother tells her to stay, Kyle says let her go...you just skipped straight on to boy number two, without saying anything like 'at last i got out' blah de blah. It was just a little...jagged there. But the rest is good! I like her reactions to boys..très amusant. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was a bit boring; lifeless, but I am still growing to love it! :) Hopefully you update son! :) |
![]() ![]() I liked this chapter! Can't wait for the next one, lol. Scott seems interesting.. Gotta wait and see what happens with him, lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() cant wait for more! -ifly*hugs* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehe this is good! Don't like her brother, sympathise totally with her, abhor that dickwad of a boyfriend. Write some more write some more! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE this, and it's only one chapter so far. It's seems like it'll be really good, especially since I love your writing. You're very good. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() The whole hair thing! Hilarious! I just recently found out who Zac Efron is - I know, I'm weird. I haven't seen any of his movies or whatever, but I now know what his hair looks like! You just like to belt out the stories don't you? I'm done. For now. I need to actually go back and EDIT my work - ah! So anyway, great start. So far I might like this one better than the roommate one? I don't know, but either way, I like it! Katie :) |
![]() ![]() I am /loving/ this story, so far! I can't wait for an update! I'm excited to see the next chapter. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Cassie! That Luke guy is a drop kick! Who breaks up with a person after sex? So so tacky. I have the feeling that Steven will make an appearance in the coming chapters, but then again I could be coming from way left field here ;) Really like the characters so far, and where you're going with the plot. Update again soon! xx Mel |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a really good start, the plot so far is interesting and i really like the characters. update soon please. |