Reviews for The Year Of Too Many Boys
sooner or later its over chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
wow. this is to amazing. you seriously nailed the brother sister relationship perfectly. {it reminds me of my own.}

im deff. gonna read the follwing chapters good job ]
WriterGurl123 chapter 2 . 6/15/2008
I think Steven is Scott's stepbrother and maybe Scott already knows about her.
Katie Saychiadu chapter 2 . 6/14/2008
Nice chapter! Mia is exactly like Cassie describes... totally needy! LOL

Hm, I guess we'll find out how much hooking up takes place in the next chapter!

Katie :)
tobslytobby chapter 2 . 6/11/2008
this story is really interesting. i like it a lot. udpate soon please.
PoorEnglishArtist chapter 2 . 6/11/2008
This was good - there was just one moment of confusion: when she's trying to get out of the house, and her mother tells her to stay, Kyle says let her just skipped straight on to boy number two, without saying anything like 'at last i got out' blah de blah. It was just a little...jagged there. But the rest is good! I like her reactions to boys..très amusant. :D
rachelaine chapter 2 . 6/11/2008
This chapter was a bit boring; lifeless, but I am still growing to love it! :) Hopefully you update son! :)
Kimberly chapter 2 . 6/11/2008
I liked this chapter! Can't wait for the next one, lol.

Scott seems interesting.. Gotta wait and see what happens with him, lol.
Its.Not.Me.Its.You chapter 2 . 6/10/2008
cant wait for more!

PoorEnglishArtist chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
Hehe this is good! Don't like her brother, sympathise totally with her, abhor that dickwad of a boyfriend. Write some more write some more! :D
rachelaine chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
I LOVE this, and it's only one chapter so far. It's seems like it'll be really good, especially since I love your writing. You're very good. :)
Katie Saychiadu chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
The whole hair thing! Hilarious!

I just recently found out who Zac Efron is - I know, I'm weird. I haven't seen any of his movies or whatever, but I now know what his hair looks like!

You just like to belt out the stories don't you? I'm done. For now. I need to actually go back and EDIT my work - ah! So anyway, great start. So far I might like this one better than the roommate one? I don't know, but either way, I like it!

Katie :)
Kimberly chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
I am /loving/ this story, so far! I can't wait for an update! I'm excited to see the next chapter. :D
EdwardGirl11 chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
Poor Cassie! That Luke guy is a drop kick! Who breaks up with a person after sex? So so tacky.

I have the feeling that Steven will make an appearance in the coming chapters, but then again I could be coming from way left field here ;)

Really like the characters so far, and where you're going with the plot.

Update again soon!


tobslytobby chapter 1 . 6/3/2008
this is a really good start, the plot so far is interesting and i really like the characters. update soon please.
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