|Reviews for Natural High|
| SayIt'sWrong chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
This is good. I liked it. The rhyme scheme was good; natural and not forced, and very original in places too.
Well done with this
| Cindy Moon chapter 1 . 6/21/2008
I do like this one. The rhythm helps convey the mood evoked with "natural high". Diction is spot on as usual.
-Cindy Moon *)
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
I thought the third line could use some punctuation or something... it read a bit confusingly
lights flaring rapid...rapidly
The rhyme scheme was really random, which kinda bothered me but other than that I liked it a lot. It described the whole idea really amazingly with awesome images and really great word choices. Nice job!