|Reviews for If|
| dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
Haha, I like it!
I like the contrast you created. You started off descriptive and metaphorical, then dropped the third line.
Speaking of which, I liked a lot. It's both humorous and deep, and carries a lot of meaning in both cases.
Awesome work! :D
| WEAK chapter 1 . 9/2/2008
I'd rather stand...
| english summer rain chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
sweet. this is so simplistically brilliant. not much more i can say. great work :)
| Solstice Of Light chapter 1 . 6/5/2008
I definitely would not :] I'd wipe you clean :] Statue or not ...
| Ashelin chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
This reminded me of the Regina Spektor song "Us" except perhaps a little more realistically explicit? I liked it as a metephor to life and love though, very fitting. Tons of pigeon shit. Great job.