Wonderful story, you are an amazing writer! Supposed to be studying for finals but didn't want to stop reading this story. I love your concept of feeders and suckers. Very different from anything I have read before! Best of luck in future works!

oh i loved your story.u are so talented and i pretty much liked Aleda and Ryan,they were just the sweetest couple u so much for making my nyts and days with your fabulous you all the best in your future work!

wow,what are they?am kinda confused

AMAZING story. i dont understand why u hv so few reviews! i think the problem is ur summary. it's not very attractive. way too vague. n the title... i don't see the link between the title n the story! could u explain it to me pls? anw, i totally LOVED this. n the best part abt the romance is there was obvious chemistry between ryan n aleda the whole time, WITHOUT excessive sexual tension n activity (including kissing), which happens too much in most of the stories on this site. amazing story. get it published. :)

I really love your story! You created your own universe, species, monsters... Finally something new, original !

You definitely made my day ( more than one for the matter...)

:)

(sorry if there is any mistakes, I'm french so... not my native language )

Awesome and original. You're an absolute genius.

Sian x

genius!

L

Hi :)

I've already read all of this story and everything, I just can't figure out the Zeus reference!

A little help? :(

THanks,

millie

Oh my, oh my!

It's done... for a second time! Hehe... like I said before... sorry I haven't reviewed but I've been gone without a steady internet. I'm in Buenos Aires, Argentina, and leaving tonight to go back to Toronto. I'm glad to be leaving, the city left me with mixed feelings.

Anyway... congratulations, lady. You're done... again ;). I'm glad you redid the story, I feel this version is much stronger. And you HAVE taken out quite a bit of the fluff of the last one... like the training session with Aleda dressed in very little. Hehehe... you have to love Ryan's hormonal reaction. I kind of missed that (that Ryan being a little bit more hormonal) a bit in this version but it's quite alright... the fact that Ryan is 50 but in an 18 - 20 year old's body still got through.

Congratulations dear. I look forward to the sequel... I know I haven't read Echoes in the Twilight. I'm actually waiting for you to be done with it before I read it. I'll still review, it's just that I'm up to my nose in on-going stories and can't take in another one. So yes... let me know once it's done, ok? And have that sequel up soon ;)

Congrats, darling!

This is definitely one of the best stories I have ever read on this site. I got your message about the publishers saying that there are too many vampire books on the market but that's ridiculous because Aleda and the rest aren't vampires. It's a new twist and I don't think you should give up.

Please update very soon because I'm assuming that the next chapter is going to be the Calling and the party when she officially does turn eighteen. This story is so awesome, please publish it after it's up on this site. Good job.

You seriously need to update as soon as possible because this story is really growing on me. I just know she's going to decide to become a hunter after all her training and how much she likes killing the feeders and other demons. Anyway, awesome story...I love it!

Hey, hey!

Eh... so cute. So, maybe the last review in a few days. BUT! Before I go... just one question: perhaps I am remembering wrong but I don't recall Nate being anywhere around that nest-hunt scene, why was Ryan jealous then? Was it that they were talking or something? The day that she was really uposet about Nate being a bit of a jerk?

Ooh! Super huge fight... very nice. I like it better this way than how it was broken up in the original, much better! And I noticed you added in the whole "you were only interested after you found out I was a hunter-born" bit... well done! But honestly... Ryan is such a stupid jerk... did he just yell out "30 damn feeders in the middle of the day" in the middle of the cafeteria? Tsk tsk.

On another note... I'm off to Argentina tomorrow, so if you update tomorrow I'll be able to read it before I leave but then might not be able to read anymore for a while as I won't have much access to an internet connection. If I don't get the chance to while I'm there, I'll read all updates when I get back.

eh!

D I do love this chapter... it's one of those "FINALLY!" moments.

I just realized one thing... when Ryan goes to talk to Zak... I feel like it's too easy, you know? I don't know... I feel like Zak shouldn't so immediately trust Ryan. I understand that no hunter/ex-organizer would be less than happy to hear about Mike Connor's behaviour. But either Ryan should give more examples to strengthen his case or maybe Zak should hint at a reason for trusting Ryan so easily even though they're clearly not very close (maybe Ryan's reputation during the war? Or his current one for a one-man-nest-clearing machine?).

Just a thought -shrug-