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East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
a very very interesting idea. it's also beautiful. you paint an excellent imagery.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
Ah, those last lines are beautiful. Though I don't think that is something only a tree can learn, as our fellow human beings seem to be capable of it at all times. Even I sometimes, though most often I don't have that gift(curse?). Great job, vivid and interesting imagery. Keep up the good work.
Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
This was a very good piece, I especially like the last two lines. Keep it Up!