Reviews for Geology of Blood
lkjhgfdswertyuikmnbvcxsrtyuknb chapter 2 . 11/2/2008

You updated! Horray, horray!

(I saw your writing schedule on , btw. I have one of those too. I have a cycle for how I update now! Yay! :D)

I need to know what they'll do in c3...
Annabel Wynters chapter 2 . 9/12/2008
This is interesting, I can't wait to see what'll happen next!
lkjhgfdswertyuikmnbvcxsrtyuknb chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
Oh, coolies! I like your story ideas, and I want to see more of this :D
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
Nice beginning. Good, except for a few things I would change:

1. '"This way" she smiled' '"This way." She smiled'.

2. "It is lucky the White Guards . . ." should be "It is lucky; the White Guards . . ."

3. "White Guards prison" should be "White Guards' prison"

4. '"right now 'ill suit me" he grinned' should be '"Right now 'ill suit me." He grinned'

Besides that good job! Keep writing.

Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a lovely day and a wonderful summer.

~Twilight Starr~