|Reviews for Feelings of|
| Der Adler Des Mondes chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
This sort of reminds me of love, more of a crush!
The briefness of the poem in each line seems to correlate to me, to a heart.
The ending of the poem on pink seems to finish of a crescendo where the answer will come back down. (I.e another poem maybe?)
The briefness while nice, left me wanting more. You really could craft a story within!
| annie chapter 1 . 6/5/2008
i'd like to bounce you up and down on my knee baby.
| Sam chapter 1 . 6/5/2008
Insightful use of repitition and illiteration.