Reviews for Looking at a Broken Man
VelvetyCheerio chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
This actually brought tears to my eyes. Good work on this. You're an awesome writer. VelvetyCheerio.
Lime-Cat chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
I like this essay because you did a good job of portraying the child's psyche.

I particularly like the ending because you incorporate some beautiful imagery that a child can imagine about moons being really bright pancakes. This really brought a smile to my face because I thought it was very cute.

It has been a very long time since I've read "To Kill a Mockingbird", but I really love that book. I also like the references to Scout (your narrator?) and Boo Radley (the man in rags?).

I think this was a very nicely written essay and I did spot a couple small grammatical errors, but I passed them off as a style of writing for this particular piece to make it sound child-like.


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