Haha, great chapter! I like Marah already and I think the grey is starting to realize she is not the typical human who gets a pet to use kind of person. Can't wait till he changes to human form though! LOL!

I really like it so far, and look forward to the next chapters! Update soon! :D

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nice chapters.. it is really good.

so update ASAP,

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xblacksoul

ITS COOL! I LIKE IT! UPDATE ASAP!

I think this is quite good. I found myself intrigued by the whole chapter - particularly about how inhuman beings were labeled as 'demons' and sold as pets. I loved the refreshing take and angle; I can truly sense that this is quite a promising ficlet. Aside from a few minor grammar blips ( which sadly aren't free from any writer's work, so you needn't worry about it ), I think this an awesome beginning to a mysterious tale.

You've peeked my interest - congrats ! Now hurry up and write another chapter, I'm waiting !

~Jo

Pretty Cool.

Do these werewolves have a human form?

Wow, this is much different than I imagined, but I really like it. The idea of having a pet werewolf is a completely different spin on werewolves and the supernatural genre. I like how she picks the meanest werwolf out of the batch. Surely, he will be quite a handful.

I didn't notice anything to give you feedback on, so I just settle for saying that this is amazing. And I hope you can update again soon. Hopefully, by that time, I'll have something a little more productive to say.

Nice work so far,

Faded Soulfire.