REALLY love the idea for this, the whole world that you created and the order of things -a very unique and good idea I must say, that makes for interesting reading. Also very much like the array of characters you have created and appreciate you taking your own time to reveal them to us, rather than give full descriptions and the low down on their personalities right from the off.

Sophisticated use of language, perhaps sometimes overdone but far better than the general author's on this site. Hats off to you :)

Oh my God... Y U NO UPDATE?

please update! please! i also really hope raze and Marah get closer and end up togther! if they are not i would like a heads up, because i don't like getting my hopes up just to have them crushed. its a lovely story!...in need of updating!

please please put raze and marah together!

this story is brilliant! i love it soo very much, i mean the plot is filled with twists! and im very happy there is some progress between raze and marah.

such a giod story! the way you expand on the mythos is really good. i almosy forgot werewolves change on the full moon. can't wait to see how that turns out!

i really love the amount of depth and effort you put into your story. i love the references you add, they are very helpful and interesting to read.

why do i get the feeling raze is going to fall head over heels for cassy?

i was wondering if there was a deeper meaning to him calling her a bitch non stop? because technically it means female dog. so it she some kinda connection...subconsciously?

really cassy is a work of art! i love her to bits!

thats a great chapter! please finish this story! if you have difficulties with writers block, rereading my stories always helps me push on!

very good chapter! i can't wait to see what happens next. its such a lovely story.

i thi k cassy is one of my favorite character! i loved it when she talked about not thinking him licking the ladle was hygienic! i laughed really hard.

that was so cute and well written! please update!