Sophisticated use of language, perhaps sometimes overdone but far better than the general author's on this site. Hats off to you :)

Oh my God... Y U NO UPDATE?

please update! please! i also really hope raze and Marah get closer and end up togther! if they are not i would like a heads up, because i don't like getting my hopes up just to have them crushed. its a lovely story!...in need of updating!

please please put raze and marah together!

this story is brilliant! i love it soo very much, i mean the plot is filled with twists! and im very happy there is some progress between raze and marah.

such a giod story! the way you expand on the mythos is really good. i almosy forgot werewolves change on the full moon. can't wait to see how that turns out!

i really love the amount of depth and effort you put into your story. i love the references you add, they are very helpful and interesting to read.

why do i get the feeling raze is going to fall head over heels for cassy?

i was wondering if there was a deeper meaning to him calling her a bitch non stop? because technically it means female dog. so it she some kinda connection...subconsciously?

really cassy is a work of art! i love her to bits!

thats a great chapter! please finish this story! if you have difficulties with writers block, rereading my stories always helps me push on!

very good chapter! i can't wait to see what happens next. its such a lovely story.

i thi k cassy is one of my favorite character! i loved it when she talked about not thinking him licking the ladle was hygienic! i laughed really hard.

that was so cute and well written! please update!

i like but there is something off about her character...kinda reminiscent of a masochist.