Reviews for The White Hour
Mallygina chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
That was really creepy, and really good. I was seriously freaked!

Keep writing!

Mallygina
tangledwebweweave chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
I am going to comment as I go:

The introduction was nice. Running from body heat doesn't sound too good.I think he is dreaming that he woke up. I hate that sound! Especially when I want quiet. Like when I am watching TV or reading a book. Or maybe he really is awake? That would suck! (the switch and the doorknob)That is really creepy that he is still living. WHAT is it? It WOULD be the STUPID headset. I should have guessed.

WHY would you want to do that to people?

Okay, I am done. Nice job, but it seemed repetitive. I don't know if it was scary though...for me.
ROexx chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
shivers, kinda creepy. not that much though. you got potential, kay. Des