Reviews for Sunday Dress
Itakru chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
(Been awhile since I've been on. . . .) I have to say, you fooled me with the title into thinking it was a more innocent writing, but I should know better by now with you. About this writing though, it's good, and it has its own nice touch, but it doesn't have that WOW to it that most of your writings usually have. I'm not sure what it was, but it lacked a little something-maybe it's just me. Either way, it's still a good work, and keep it up! Hope to talk to you soon! :D

-Crystal
Tranquil Thorns chapter 1 . 6/5/2008
How creepy! /

I really liked the chorus, though it was pretty disturbing. Still, I thought it worked for this, and you the emotion across well.

I noticed that you made a minor typo: 'a breath a way' should be 'away'.

In any case, I enjoyed reading this.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 6/5/2008
That is a little more than horrific. Though I should hardly be saying anything, with the fact that I've too written things that are disturbing. I think it was a little repetative, but otherwise the emotion was good. I saw it as a sort of metal song, but that's just my own opinion. Good job.