|Reviews for I Hate You, Right?|
| Hazelnut Romance chapter 10 . 12/1/2008
| g.na chapter 10 . 11/4/2008
this story was really cute! I liked it a lot!
| g.na chapter 9 . 11/4/2008
i love this story!
| g.na chapter 7 . 11/4/2008
oh, my god... no
| weeeangie chapter 10 . 10/11/2008
nice short story! alot of details for a short story.
| henbee chapter 10 . 9/18/2008
This is pure genius! Haha, especially the epilogue!
I am so sad... :( I'm going to miss it!
| Casayna chapter 1 . 9/18/2008
I loved the story. It was a very interesting read. I understand everything the two are going through. I used to feel the same about my boyfriend. I hated him but now I love him. Kind of weird but interesting none the less. But I do hope you write a sequel about Lulu and Alan. I hope you read my story when I get to submitting it. Well continue with the good work.
| polkadotts chapter 9 . 9/17/2008
hahaha that ol' love hate thing its hilarious weird things but for the most part nice
| ReadWriteLive chapter 5 . 9/1/2008
The story started out good but it's become very unbelieveable... I would suggest going back to chapter 3 and altering the story line..
A good one might be that Ariana is raped or almost raped by Tony after he spikes the drinks and she turns to Shawn ...
You could also just stay with them all having fun with different people, some guy breaks her heart (or girl breaks his heart) and the two start talking...walks on the beach together, etc...
Either way, you've now got them flying from some place to and from Hawaii quickly and slightly unrealistically, you have some "mob" type kid and the FBI...it's a little much
I'm not trying to bash your style and if you are going for sensational writing then that's fine, just my suggestions.
| henbee chapter 9 . 9/1/2008
No! That's not fair! You cannot just leave it hanging like that! I demand an update!
| henbee chapter 8 . 8/3/2008
That is incredibly sweet.
Please update soon!
| be.my.reality chapter 8 . 8/1/2008
so now he questions himself?
just like a man too. lol.
| henbee chapter 7 . 7/22/2008
Oh my god, no!
My brain is coming out of my ears.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon!
| henbee chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
Haha, I love this.
| anonymous chapter 4 . 6/27/2008
Suspicion is rising. Keep up the good work.