Reviews for Consume
deefective chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
I really like the simplicity of this piece. I'm not sure if I'm right but I get that this is about intimacy. It's only 3 lines but still it captures idea of what you're talking about. Good job.
Sydney C.W chapter 1 . 6/7/2008
I like it because after i read it the first time, i didnt quite get it, then i read it again, and i got it.

i like that because i love it when you really have to stop and think about what you just read.

very creative, and i just love it!

keep up the fantastic work :)
Unique1952 chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
Very nice, I like your style. Your chice of words give great details - I really like it.