Reviews for When She Smiles
my princess ending chapter 1 . 10/12/2014
This warms my heart so much. As I read through this story, I can feel what the girl is feeling but at the same time I feel what the guy is feeling too. It's so clear that he likes her but doesn't know it yet. I love the way you wrote it because it's so realistic and touching.
Julietish chapter 1 . 8/31/2014
Hi! It's Juliet from A Drop of Romeo. When your story was featured on ADoR, this review was written for it: This is a story I remember reading a long time ago that has always been stuck in my head and only recently have I been able to find it. It is told from the male's point of view, usually difficult to pull off, but mandybeth most definitely succeeds; instead of being soppy in any way, the protagonist is stubborn, cutting, witty and completely oblivious. Yet he always tries to make the unnamed female protagonist smile, without knowing why. The story unfurls after she reveals that her boyfriend Preston proposed, a man who doesn't earn a favorable description. The story is very well written, making you feel for the characters, particularly frustration and the grammar is perfect throughout - difficult to accomplish when writing in the present tense. Plus the fact it's incredibly cute.
Jess chapter 1 . 1/28/2014
This story is adorable :-)
daisukiklove chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
So cute3
mightya chapter 1 . 11/12/2013
Squeeeee! So sweet! . good one shot! :)
APassionForReadingAndWriting chapter 1 . 9/4/2013
Great story! I love it :-) It's nice how he's jealous!
Yi chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
I love your writing style. You write perspectives beautifully and this jerk's (his words, not mine) thought flow is flawlessly written. I could go on singing your praises.
Anonymous chapter 1 . 6/20/2013
This so cute! I loved this one-shot! Im thinking to make an account just to favourite it or something! :D Its really awesome :)
Be-U-tiful chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
Aww this was so sweet I loved it! (:
Dandy352 chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
Maybe he could be less of an arrogant being and admit that she likes her too with pure humility :) But never mind that, every couple has their own love story :) I liked what you wrote! Good job!
teen chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
it's a good one shot. I like it.
salma chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
i love it!
The Quotidian Life chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
omg omg omg! I LOOOOOVVVVVVEEEEEE IT! It's amazing! Definitely goes on my favourite list!
EQ chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
Great story! You should attempt a novel, you could totally pull it off.
Lethaldoze chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
aww..that was so sweet! :)
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