Reviews for When She Smiles |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It was kinda odd but yeah still cute :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooh, I really like this one shot! I love reading from male perspectives, and this one blew my mind. It's sweet, short, romantic, everything a one shot should be. Thanks for posting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This warms my heart so much. As I read through this story, I can feel what the girl is feeling but at the same time I feel what the guy is feeling too. It's so clear that he likes her but doesn't know it yet. I love the way you wrote it because it's so realistic and touching. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! It's Juliet from A Drop of Romeo. When your story was featured on ADoR, this review was written for it: This is a story I remember reading a long time ago that has always been stuck in my head and only recently have I been able to find it. It is told from the male's point of view, usually difficult to pull off, but mandybeth most definitely succeeds; instead of being soppy in any way, the protagonist is stubborn, cutting, witty and completely oblivious. Yet he always tries to make the unnamed female protagonist smile, without knowing why. The story unfurls after she reveals that her boyfriend Preston proposed, a man who doesn't earn a favorable description. The story is very well written, making you feel for the characters, particularly frustration and the grammar is perfect throughout - difficult to accomplish when writing in the present tense. Plus the fact it's incredibly cute. |
![]() ![]() This story is adorable :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() So cute3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Squeeeee! So sweet! . good one shot! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! I love it :-) It's nice how he's jealous! |
![]() ![]() I love your writing style. You write perspectives beautifully and this jerk's (his words, not mine) thought flow is flawlessly written. I could go on singing your praises. |
![]() ![]() This so cute! I loved this one-shot! Im thinking to make an account just to favourite it or something! :D Its really awesome :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww this was so sweet I loved it! (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Maybe he could be less of an arrogant being and admit that she likes her too with pure humility :) But never mind that, every couple has their own love story :) I liked what you wrote! Good job! |
![]() ![]() it's a good one shot. I like it. |
![]() ![]() i love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg omg omg! I LOOOOOVVVVVVEEEEEE IT! It's amazing! Definitely goes on my favourite list! |