|Reviews for When She Smiles|
| sesskagomegirl chapter 1 . 7/6/2009
i like this story a lot and i love it you are a really great author who wrote this really great story.
| JamieBell chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
Refreshing take on the age-old cliche! Not to mention the guy's POV. Doesn't get much better than that! Loved it! :)
| holly is fainting chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
I've had this bookmarked for ages, and I'm so glad I finally read it. It's perfect, sweet, simple fluff. Adorable. I love stories from the male POV too. Great job.
| ghurl00 chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
i lavv the oneshot. it's so sweet:)
| dreamgazer220 chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
Aww, that was so cute! I loved it. And I wasn't really sure where it was going, but it was definitely good. And I also love how you didn't use names aside from "Preston", because sometimes names don't really matter. Great job!
| letyoursoultakeflight chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
Love it! Definitely like it from the guys POV :D
| brown.eyed-kid chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
ah, so sweet! xo
| JustPlainJane chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
Wow, that was beautiful :) I loved it!
Very well written. Great job, Mandy :)
| theaddictedfighter chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
Ooh, this was cute. ;)
I don't know... it didn't seem very fluffy, more like a more serious romance but I think that's good to see every once in a while. I like how you progressed the two of them until they meet in the middle - it's quite cute. Most of the lines you use to describe their situation aren't cliche, which is again awesome. I roll my eyes when cliche phrases come out, but I'm being hypocritical because I write cliche phrases too, occasionally. This was sort of different and I didn't LOVE it, with a chocolate cherry on top, but it was good so keep up the nice work. Keep on writing, don't be afraid to let the words flow. ;)
| Hellcat81 chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
very sweet. i like it how there is no closer description on the characters. :)
| SamB chapter 1 . 5/4/2009
this is one of my most favourite one-shots. can i just say? would love it if you wrote more!
| styling16 chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
| grassong chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
this was soo cute!
very fun to read!
i love how you wrote it in a guy's pov
good job! :]
| wolfprint chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
that was soo sweet!
| Veronica Kimble chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
aw. that was so sweet. XD