|Reviews for Jumping Life|
| lijuan chapter 1 . 6/4/2010
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| Addictive- Like Cocaine chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
You have an amazing use of vocab; and did a very good job capturing the emotive veiw. I really ejoyed it, and thought the point was well put across! Good job.
| Frolicking.Pandas chapter 1 . 1/22/2009
You live in London don't you? Ah, never mind, you don't need to answer that.
Anyway... the juice... Well, it read more like story narrative than a poem, but it really captured emotion, and there weren't any grammatical errors to speak of. So, I like it.
Ooh and i also love the word 'abyss' ... in general.
| Isca chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
An exhilarating read!
| Original Screen Name chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
Anyway, I really like the figurative language used in this poem. 'A gap of darkness between two spheres of light.' I loved that.
Just wanted to leave my mark and show that I've been here.