Reviews for there's a new sun in my sky
Isca chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
I liked the last stanza the best. It had a sense of honesty and hope to it that I really liked.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
The fifth stanza is like a brush against reality that you don't want to accept. Maybe I'm just putting my own words to your poetry so I can relate to it. That's what everybody does anyway. Poetry will never be everything it was meant to be, just what it is to the individual. And anyone who says differently doesn't realize what a soul is. Anyway, great job.