Reviews for You fed me
403 Forbidden chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
Hmm...this is an interesting way you presented your idea, the metonymy of using the concept of "feeding" lies instead of telling them, and how you took that a step further; I like it.

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lymli chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
it's a sweet way to say goodbye.
Shasta Valentine chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
beautiful.

i would actually even go further and develop this into a larger set forrm of poetry.

but great execution.

-sv