|Reviews for You fed me|
| 403 Forbidden chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
Hmm...this is an interesting way you presented your idea, the metonymy of using the concept of "feeding" lies instead of telling them, and how you took that a step further; I like it.
| lymli chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
it's a sweet way to say goodbye.
| Shasta Valentine chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
i would actually even go further and develop this into a larger set forrm of poetry.
but great execution.