Reviews for Hatred
The Reverse Edge Blade chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
Hmm...This wasn't one of your best ones, although I understood that the shortness and the fact that it didn't explain so much played an important part in the poem. Quiet like my own style.

It's hard to comment on, really, but I can tell that there are many deep thoughts in these lines.

Keep at it and write more!

The Reverse Edge Blade
rira-chan chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
wow this is really really great. i know this feeling. ] this was wonderfully written and you got your point across nicly i think. good job. :]

rira-chan

p.s thank you so much for your reveiw!
Living Life Free chapter 1 . 6/7/2008
Your words: "I'm dumb We're fake" In my opinion those were the powerful words. It seems like everything in the world is full of dumb, fake things these days.
Unique1952 chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
Short and to the point. I like it, it gives another view on a commonly used word. Nice.