|Reviews for Heart Lotion SPF 20|
| Emoddess chapter 26 . 8/31
I started reading this story yesterday and I love it. It definitely got me on a roller coaster of emotions like sadness, happiness, excitement and especially when Eve cried on Jesse's shoulder and she was so guilty, that was pretty heartbreaking. I think I was sniffling non-stop on that part because you could practically feel the pain, burden and sorrow that Eve had to carry because she had to hurt not only Jesse was torn but also Adam, Gabe, Teddy and Stefan. I also love how you shaped the characters and concept and I gotta say, I thought the story was completed but then I noticed that you mentioned in the A/N that it only has four more chapters to go. It also makes me pretty anxious because the story is unpredictable that I can't anticipate what might happen. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next update and reading this till the end~ _
Keep up the great work! :D
| Guest chapter 26 . 5/25
Please please update! I love this story so much and it's killing me that it's not completed!
| riahbear0623 chapter 1 . 4/30
I just want to say, im not even past the introductions, and yet, I find myself undeniably, and completely enraptured by the fluidity of your words. Please, PLEASE, for the sake of modern literature, write a full length novel and pick a publisher! Not only would you get rich but its would be a true gift to any and all avid readers.
| EmeraldLily chapter 26 . 4/29
Your writing is so beautiful and poetic, but then you get tons of humor mixed in with the seriousness too. You have a perfect balance, and I really hope that you can update soon, even if you haven't posted anything in a while. :) I can't remember how long I've been following your works, even if I've never commented. But I suddenly got inspired to re-read this, so I wanted to send some nice thoughts your way. :)
| sagaalmohamed chapter 26 . 9/7/2015
NOOOOO! Oh, come on! Why end it here. It's been more then two years... :/
| snoww chapter 26 . 7/23/2015
THIS CANT BE HOW IT ENDS! NONONONONONONONO CLIFFHANGERSS! YOU NEED TO FINISH WRITING THE LAST CHAPTERS!
| Aretice N. Treader chapter 1 . 1/17/2015
I think I like this story so far. Your grammar is excellent as far as I can see, and I enjoy the writing style. I don't know if I really approve of the Five's pastime during school, however. I think that the fact that Debbie Fairweather is (probably) over twenty years old and is still in school is puzzling, as with the Five. I'm sure it'll be explained in future chapters. This first chapter was written exceedingly well. It leaves the story open for the next chapter well and introduces the main characters in detail without giving too much away. Great job!
| ClippedNinja chapter 26 . 12/8/2014
Wow this is such an amazing story!' I really can't wait for the next chapter you've clevely planned this out and it's sooo exciting when pieces are fit together and make real sense :D I read that you've been really busy with work and I hope you get a breather soon! I would really love to know what happens in the end eventually! I will just have to be patient and hope all goes well for you cause this story is amazing :D
| Lexi Eraka chapter 26 . 11/23/2014
Oh... My gosh.. Can't Believe with only four chapters left you stop updating lol and with that type of cliffhanger? Found your account today and since you're a great writer I'll follow this and see if you update anytime soon. :)
| tiltedHead chapter 26 . 10/16/2014
I am so in love with this story you are an excellent writer. The funny banters among the characters make it easy to fall in love with them and thus in love with your story )
| iamleslie chapter 26 . 9/30/2014
i can't wait for the next update...
| Edna-Mode413 chapter 26 . 9/21/2014
WORST CLIFFHANGER EVER GAAAHHHH IM DYING TO KNOW NOW but there's been over a year hiatus so yeah... Not too hopeful about that but who knows...
I knew Gabe was suspicious but it all boils down to the "why?" Because each individual has his/her own backstory. Hopefully life hasn't kept you toooooo busy so you can finally finish this spectacular, spellbinding story
| Edna-Mode413 chapter 12 . 9/20/2014
The tone and feel of this story reminds me of "The Raven Boys" by Maggie st... (Something) o.O although I personally like Adam better than (the lead male male character in raven boys; totally blanking on his name)
But kinda strange since this was written waaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyy before raven boys was published lol
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/11/2014
Omg I laughed laughed and died
| GinzzzRoxxx chapter 26 . 8/15/2014
You don't often get twists like these when you read free online romance novels. Colour me impressed.