Pretty good chapter

So, I know you'll probably never read this. I first read your story about a year and a half ago. I came back a few days ago and reread it. See, I never really realized it, but the thing that is so beautiful about the fiction press community is how you connect with the authors. Your story was great (obviously since I came back after a year and a half) but that's not why I'm here right now. I'm here because if you ever do read this, I want you to know that through your opening up about Lorel and through the emotion you put into your writing, you made a difference. You did. I don't know where you are now or what you're doing with your life, but I know that you have impacted mine. And you should know that. So I came back. Because after your years of work, I think you deserve to know the impact you've had. Best Wishes,
a freckled rose

This is an amazing story and I absolutely loved it. Thank you for taking the time to write it.

The first thing that came to mind at the end of this chapter is, " I like this story" and the thought was very calm.
Anyway, I like how you made the character turn out to be like that(don't know jow to explain). She is the type of girls in fiction I prefer to read about most of the time. And the way at the end about how she is observant and is in a way nonchalant and expretionless made it even better because there are only few plotlines out there woth these kind of girls as the main charcter and this is the only "written out" story I've read because There are two mangos with girls like this and that's it.

-Swift as the wind I am as I read

This story is amazing. There are no words to describe how much I enjoyed about this story. Thank you for posting it, God bless.

AMAZING, story! & if you make a second series I'll be happy and I'll stay in touch and make sure I tell my friends about this book i truly Loved it !

HAHAHA! Sucker! Nice fic

INCREDIBLE! I've reread this story and plan on doing so many times in the future! I love the characters you've included in the story and think you've done a fantastic job on the story.
Just wondering what the sequels called?

Awesome is there a sequel? (Sorry if I spelt sequel wrong)

love it! _

Awesome story ((: ! Loved it :D I kinda felt bad for josh :/ but oh well .. I hope we see him in the sequel . In gunna miss damien :(((( gosh I almost cried when he left . He totally loves her .

Loved it, absolutely amazing!

dude. I've been reading this and I can't help but think you must've read Gallagher Girls.

Josh? Blackthorne? "Spy?" THAT'S ZACH'S LINE! but I don't hate you for it, this story could be another version of GG.

No offense, love this!

Did you guys get inspired by Gallagher Girls? because I love them!

My mouth kind of dropped when I saw the name Delilah, because I was just singing that song in my head, after not listening to it for about a month. :o) This is an amazing story and I can't wait for Kevin and 'rin to start going out.