|Reviews for The Conqueror|
| Just Theo chapter 4 . 6/7/2008
What a brilliant way to end a brilliant story. However, please do not use "and" so often, it makes it boring like a speech.
" I agree that the white toilet paper looks better and it smells better and it feels better and i like it more and it blends nicely and..." You get the idea. You obviously have potential