Reviews for Inexpressible
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
I love the intensity of the first couple lines. The formatting adds to the impact. Intriguing, emotional piece. Good work.
Lily von Rider chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
This poem is short, but brilliant. I love the structure and choice of words. Although, instead of 'stunning' I'd have used 'amusing', but that's just me. You probably have a reason for that choice of word.

Great job.

Lil