Reviews for My Hard Exterior
Keree chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
This poem reminds me of one of my closest friends whom one day just last week, called me up asked that she could come over and as her mom pulled out of my lane she broke down in my arms telling me basicly what you've wrote here. I would like your permission (strickly because I think it's right todo so...) to print this off and read it to her (giving you full cretit of corse). Give me a pm about that plz. Thanxs!

-EverythingHasAnotherSide
FuckMeAlice chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
I like how this poem would be really good set to music. There's a certain rhythm to it that makes me want to hear it sung.

I also like the contrast between 'hard exterior' and 'fragile interior'. It's a device that's been used by so many people before, but here you make it fresh.

-Stardust, Review Marathoning (link in my profile)
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
You shouldnt have to worry what people think. You can be strong and also show asoft side. Breaking down is ok. Keep strong but don't hide. Awsome job!

XKristie MarieX
socks-lost chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
Its really sad how people have to hide who they are, what they feel on the inside. I think you captured the feelings well. I like this. Maybe your friends will surprsie you but hey what do i know? But I do like this. Good job keep it up!