Reviews for Neverland
Written chapter 1 . 10/8/2008
I loove peter pan. absolutely love it. so this was a fun read for me :)

good work~
GrannyP chapter 1 . 6/29/2008
This is GREAT! So I have a thing for haiku; it' really the only type of poetry that I will read or write. But usually they are boring when they are all sentimental or whatnot, but when it's about FUN stuff, like this, it makes for some of the greatest reads ever!

And just do you know, the 2nd line in the first one has only 6 syllables. But if you made it "That is" then it would be 7. Technically, the 2nd line in the 4th one also has only 6, but I tend to say "scared" with 2 syllables (thanks to my lovely accent, HA!), so it works for me!

But my favorite part was the 4th one about Captain Hook and the crocodile! That was great!

Anyway, I saw on your profile that you mentioned me on your profile, along with Jack Argyle. I LOVE Jack Argyle (in a purely platonic, fictionpress kind of way). He is hilarious! Anyway, thank you so much for reviewing Wormhole and actually enjoying it (despite the terrible ending!).