Reviews for Not What You Think
heartbreak warfare chapter 4 . 9/8/2009
Great story so far, its really insightful.

Its awful what she has to go through with the throwing up and all... my guess is you're from the Midwest or around there?

Ha, I'm from Michigan and I love Euchre. Fun game.
choc me chapter 30 . 8/22/2009
Hi! Its been two months since u last updated...hope things are ok ..
ScreamXmeXyourXsong chapter 1 . 7/9/2009

Kay so this says chapter one but ve read them all just update pah lease?
Me chapter 29 . 6/28/2009

I loved this chapter I really don't know why but I did )
Me chapter 30 . 6/27/2009

really it's really really really good

Also do you ever actuly say whats wrong with her I'm not sure if I missed it or what
choc me chapter 30 . 6/23/2009
Aw that was a sweet chapter...I'm glad Ella's found some comfort...
choc me chapter 2 . 12/22/2008
Hi T,

I was wondering if u'd be posting again soon?
choc me chapter 29 . 10/6/2008
Psh! That was really too short! I'm really curious and ur chapters are getting shorter! ~_
Keasa chapter 29 . 10/5/2008
ms. banks needs to pull the stick out of her butt. ella seems to be avoiding food more than ever. with all the info flashing in the media about warnings, candis should see more signs of an eating disorder. i'm glad ella has aaron as her rock. since he's always beena friend, but now it's obvious it may be more. ella has a lot on her plate for a teen. will she and aaron plot a way for her to stay in morton?
a.mooch chapter 29 . 10/5/2008
Aww, cute! _

Not much else there is to say. Hearing about her foster home is getting a little *coughREALLYcough* painful though.
a.mooch chapter 28 . 9/14/2008
YAY! Wait, why am I all "yay"?

I say that she gets together with Aaron. He's one nifty dude :)
choc me chapter 28 . 9/14/2008
Hey I've got my first constructive criticism! lol yeah cause usually I dont catch any mistakes in ur story. “Why haven’t we ever went out before, El?”. I think it should have been "gone out" not "went out". Past participle. Double check it if u want.

Else...not much to comment on, still wondering where ur going and how every one fits in the story. Why so much emphasis on Martick for instance? I'm also wondering abt Ella's food problem. I know u can go from bulimia to anorexia or vice versa. Is it what's happening to her?

Oh and I think I asked u before but it's still on my mind. What inspired u to write this story? You said u had it all planned from the start and it's so detailed...I keep wondering abt that.
choc me chapter 27 . 8/31/2008
I've got a few questions: Abt all the rules and procedures..did u make them up or do things really happen that way? Like the fact that she can't see her friends or use her cell phone, etc...

Also I was wondering if it was nearing the end of the story. Actually, don't answer that. I don't wanna know, cause I'm hoping it'll just go on and on...I really don't want it to end soon.

Hey I don't know why, but I'm getting the feeling that Aaron will fall out of the picture soon...

How come none of her friends tried to contact her or visit her or something?

Anyway, update soon!
Koki Enwai chapter 27 . 8/29/2008
All of her roomies suck. Especially Martick and Sasha. I hope Ella will be able to get out of there sometime soon.

Well, at least she got to see Aaron.

Awesome chapter.

- Koki
a.mooch chapter 27 . 8/29/2008
Something I STILL don't understand is why the hell they would want to lock up her phone for two weeks. It serves NO purpose whatsoever and is shockingly irritating for someone who just lost their parents.

I just think that it's unrealistic, but it's your story, do what you like...
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