Reviews for Held Up
Andrew Clancy chapter 3 . 6/10/2008
I'm not sure if it matters or not, but during this chapter, in the first letter she recieves, it makes no mention to whether the writer is a male or female, but just after it you wrote

"I caught that she was implying she knew why my 'biological parents' "

you mention that the person sending the letter was a she... I don't think that it really matters, but I am just pointing it out in case you were not aware of that slight detail.

Otherwise, the story sofar has been interesting, and I'll continue on.

Good work as well.
KarsonZ chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
Very well written. It's not something anyone ever wants to hear, but it is, unfortunately, something tha most everyone will eventually deal with. I'm not a fan of cursing, but you used it in a way that, when you think about, makes you realize in that particular situation, you would too.