|Reviews for Held Up|
| Andrew Clancy chapter 3 . 6/10/2008
I'm not sure if it matters or not, but during this chapter, in the first letter she recieves, it makes no mention to whether the writer is a male or female, but just after it you wrote
"I caught that she was implying she knew why my 'biological parents' "
you mention that the person sending the letter was a she... I don't think that it really matters, but I am just pointing it out in case you were not aware of that slight detail.
Otherwise, the story sofar has been interesting, and I'll continue on.
Good work as well.
| KarsonZ chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
Very well written. It's not something anyone ever wants to hear, but it is, unfortunately, something tha most everyone will eventually deal with. I'm not a fan of cursing, but you used it in a way that, when you think about, makes you realize in that particular situation, you would too.