Reviews for Powercut
i-want-2-delete-my-account chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
I really like the last line.
Rebecca chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
Hmm... I like, no, love it. You could've made it so much longer though. ;) My favorite line must be, "as fatigue sweeps in wet-red waves around her." Nice work.
The Exuberant chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
good poem!
Lauren Wolfe chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
Sad... Quite, quite sad... Great work with the atmosphere _
Unique1952 chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
Wow, this is really good.

"pumping it's sustenance heatedly into cool air"

Nice detail and nice use of imagery. This is really good. Nice work.