Reviews for bleed away this hope
punctured.lungs chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
heartwrenching. i love it.
Tiff chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
Gorgeous piece. :]

I liked the description and detail towards the girl's appearance.
McKinley Cooper chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
So your inspiration (your muse) is weird-keep her. She's wickedly brilliant.

East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
i thought this was very well written. and you had great analogies.