Reviews for Angel cake
AK the Twilight chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
The tried-and-true theme of the "angel on Earth" is what I found this to be. It accomplishes the message well, though I found the ending to be a bit less accomplished compared to the rest of this great poem. The photograph image puts strong emphasis on the humanity, though you insist on the image's angelic nature.

This was a bit messy, mechanic-wise. It felt confusing when describing the angelic and human nature both at once. However, this still was very well written, just not your best.

All in all, good job.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
I like all the questions about the angel. That's really great. I also liked the repetition at the end.
Unique1952 chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
Another beautiful piece. I like your choice of words

An ephemeral existance

just memories

This is very good, nice work.
thursdays and rain chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
sad.. nice descriptions though ;)