|Reviews for Not here anymore|
| Jack Milo chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
seems like its about a person who grows up and forgets who they were. Even if its not its still really good.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
It's actually kind of thing, not things.
"but you were too bussy doing nothing" ...busy
"or maybe there’s things are better" This doesn't make sense because there's is there is, but then you have things are... so that doesn't match up.
I like how you go through your mother and then your father. That worked really well. I also liked the part about the dishes as your heart. Nice job.
| Isca chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
I liked the last two lines the best.
| Unique1952 chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
This is very sad but a very good read. I feel like I can relate, sad. I wonder if this is a song? If not, I could easily see it becoming one. again, nice work with this.