Reviews for His Baby
Guest chapter 6 . 7/24/2012
what happened to the rest of the story?
anydayanywhere chapter 6 . 5/21/2012
The story is really interesting so far, and I definitely enjoy reading it. Hope to read more from you soon.
sasha5000 chapter 5 . 4/20/2012
when are you going to continue this story its great and very interesting makes me want to know what happens next.
luste chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
Good day, I was really wanted to read this story and put it off for a while. I started reading and it was really good, really good!. Ok I'm getting exicted (_). I really enjoyed this story and its potential of being great. Please reconsider and finsih or just add a few more chapters please.
sasha5000 chapter 6 . 10/27/2011
when are you going to update this story! update it please!
lillies sonets chapter 6 . 10/25/2011
Please please please can we have an update soon. Such an interesting story.
Gaaras Beloved chapter 6 . 10/22/2011
if erin is one of the stonewall isnt that incest? i might be confused.
Critiqui chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
*Erin* is the female variation for *Aaron*... So, is this main character female? Or is it that his name is just spelled in the feminine way? I don't know, the spelling just kinda got me messed up. LOL Still, awesome story. Keep going!
OtakuMe chapter 6 . 6/18/2011
Update Soon!
midnight41 chapter 6 . 6/9/2011
i really like the plot so far and the first person pov is pretty good. but i think the characters should have more personality. i cant really tell what their feeling. Please updae soon! :D
moon01234 chapter 6 . 4/28/2011
This looks awesome. v

Really, really need to read more of it. Update soon?
kiki19857 chapter 6 . 4/25/2011
any update yet?
ceeda chapter 6 . 3/30/2011
You are FINALLY BACK! I thought this story was gone for good. Hope to see more Chapters soon!
JtheChosen1 chapter 6 . 3/30/2011
I am VERY glad that you are going to re-write this and then continue this! The plot is certainly one of a kind and you had the perfect mix of humor, drama, and angst. I cannot wait for the new version!
myoregon chapter 6 . 3/30/2011
I'm so glad you're continuing this story. It's one of my favorites and I usually don't follow stories until they have a lot more chapters because most authors never finish. But, you're story intrigued me and I decided to give it a try. Only to be disappointed that you only made it a few chapters in.

I don't think you need to change much. Grammar and spelling mostly. I think you should write in first or third person depending on what comes easiest for you. Because the story will be much better if you're writing it in a style that's easiest for you. Also, getting a beta reader can really help.

Anyway, that's my opinion. I hope you will finish the story. You've had me hooked.
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