Reviews for His Baby
myoregon chapter 6 . 3/30/2011
I'm so glad you're continuing this story. It's one of my favorites and I usually don't follow stories until they have a lot more chapters because most authors never finish. But, you're story intrigued me and I decided to give it a try. Only to be disappointed that you only made it a few chapters in.

I don't think you need to change much. Grammar and spelling mostly. I think you should write in first or third person depending on what comes easiest for you. Because the story will be much better if you're writing it in a style that's easiest for you. Also, getting a beta reader can really help.

Anyway, that's my opinion. I hope you will finish the story. You've had me hooked.
RitaHouston chapter 6 . 3/28/2011
cant wait
Johnny101 chapter 6 . 3/28/2011
thank you for comming back!
jessicas favorite stories chapter 6 . 3/28/2011
i was having a massivley shitty night then i saw this. it made me feel better XD welcome back. i lookinbg forward to it
RR0renegade chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
so far i like it a lot ..why did u stop posting or is it complete already?
Crestpha chapter 5 . 12/31/2010
Love your story.
XxXMusicSavesMySoulXxX chapter 5 . 8/4/2010
LOVE your story. Hope you update soon. :D
thecakethief chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
aagh! you dont know how bad you hooked me with the mafia thing! i love mafia stories and mpreg stories, AND YOU GENIUS, you combined them! thank you so much! oh, and i'd give you a kangaroo in exchange for updating soon, kay? :D
iheartgaympreg chapter 5 . 6/13/2010
seriouslyy stop being lazy and get a new chap in! i freaking love this story and have been waitting months wah
Site-3 chapter 5 . 5/13/2010
You BITCH! I need you to write more or I'll send my OWN MAFIA SQUAD to kill YOU! I know where you LIVE!

P.S.-Love you!

"lol. sorry like, much?"
Natural and fake beauty chapter 5 . 4/19/2010
omgomgomg dying to know how diana knows about the baby. inside mob info or wat!
Natural and fake beauty chapter 3 . 4/19/2010
okay i didnt know hems that look like men men could get prego. thats cool.
Natural and fake beauty chapter 2 . 4/19/2010
wat the hell does that lady mean its not common but it does happen to men? the hell!
Natural and fake beauty chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
omgomgomg he slept with a mobster baby. gotdamn. lol
Clovers-Charm chapter 5 . 3/6/2010
Omg this is a really cool story! You have to do more, I cant wait to read the next chapter.

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