|Reviews for Selfpity|
| Erica chapter 1 . 9/2/2008
I like this. It's very open minded. But also very interesting.
| digna's boobs chapter 1 . 8/26/2008
if i give you my boobs will you feel better? jk.
| melo chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
jus one sentence: you are your own worst enemy
| Undead Serenade chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
"Submerged in self-pity"
is the best line in this poem, it feels like someone face down and it fits how self pity feels. The rest of the poem is okay, I think it could have been done a bit stronger, but it does give the emotion and feeling I think you wanted to convey. I'm sorry this is how you feel, though.