Reviews for Why My Memory Isn't Perfect and Other Lies |
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![]() ![]() ![]() haha this reminds me of a bunch of conversations with my brother. the both of you sound so funny! this is just what i needed; light, funny, and entertaining. keep up the awesomeness. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LMFAO! that was great! it really got a chuckle out of me D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Made me laugh! Taking over the world...ah, every girl's dream :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Funny! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was really cute! funny too. i love these kinds of stories, but the first paragraph wasn't that great. it didn't hook me in. i like the way you wrote it. very funny, very cute. i hope you write more! ~Kay |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I did actually find that rather funny, I didn't think that I would, but I did. I thought it would be your average, badly written story about taking over the world, but it was AWESOME! I loved how you wrote it so that I could practially see the characters and how they just seemed so real. My only real problem with the story is that the beginning IS kinda boring, like I said before, I thought it was going to be medeocre, and those sort of things make readers stop reading your story! I recommend changing at least the short of "A/N" at the beginning. GREAT STORY THOUGH! Write on! PS: This is SO going in my C2! |