|Reviews for Enchantress|
| Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
but I call her Enchantress
'cause I saw her dancing
on the wire of my bashful desires.
ist sehr schön
| Scarlett Wynter chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
"'cause I saw her dancing/on the wire of my bashful desires" what line, it flows so nicely and says so much. I just see this whole poem as a song. the only thing is that I think you should add the word "does" to the line "how many holes (does) happiness have?"
| The Exuberant chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
good poem! i liked the first paragraph a lot!
| LadyRini478 chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
Oh, this was one of my favorite poems by you! Oh, this is so hot yet regretful! This is defintely one of my favorite poems of all! Beautiful imagery, stong message, and great and smooth beat and pace! Wonderful!
| Averybarbarian chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
perhaps it shouldn't be rated k but other than that I really liked the imigery. He seems to have some regret but he doesn't seem to care. Good job
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
I gotta say I would make this rating T. The descriptions of everything were interesting. I also just like this piece because it is a totally different piece from you and I like the change.
| Unique1952 chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
This seems somewhat mysterious. Nice. I love your use of details and imagery, it creates a nice illusion. Good work with this.