Reviews for Devil Take It All
SnoQueen chapter 13 . 10/9/2009
Hey...I just read this after reading 'Solitude' and loving EVERY bit of it!

Your writing truly astounds me and I am pleased to say that you are right up there as one of my favourite authors (unfortunately, I don't have an account - but know that you're still up there!) ]

...I enjoyed reading this and I loved all the characters and your form and style of writing...

...Now, excuse me as I go to check out your profile again and read your other publishings...;)

Keep writing,

SnoQueen
Need 'n' Know chapter 4 . 10/5/2009
Hi!

I think in chapter 1, there was one word, "I could" or something... should be more "I can [see]" I think. Something like that. Present tense, you know...

Oh, and in chapter 4, this one, it's weird that Chad said "shimmery." D Kind of not manly, you know!

AHAHAH, and one of my main character's name is Vince. Just sayin'. Except they're both two entirely different people. Randomness...

Have you ever read Robert Browning's "My Last Duchess"? It's about a trophy wife sort-of-deal. It was pretty good. I was reminded of that cuz Chad mentioned "trophy wife," and I was hoping that Vince wouldn't be that type of person... urgh, men. Unbelievable, aren't they? XD

Need 'n' Know
ChocoResha chapter 11 . 9/20/2009
Zomg, that was it? THAT WAS IT? Haha, just kidding about the freaking out ] It was a tad sudden though. Overall, nice story! D I'll be reading your rewrites after I'm done looking through the rest of the chapters (?) and author's note- or something :] Hope you don't mind me spamming your inbox with a review for every chapter
ChocoResha chapter 10 . 9/20/2009
Aw, such swwet Chad and Nessa moments! On a side note, ahahahaha, Nessa can't seem to control herself!
ChocoResha chapter 9 . 9/20/2009
Well, the fight's finally over with. It was bound to happen some time! Just sad that little Rachel had to be there and all. Chad's so romantic. I envy Nessa ;
ChocoResha chapter 8 . 9/20/2009
I thought Nessa's actions were pretty reasonable ] And pheew, there's almost nothing smexier in fiction than a hot persistent guy. Oh, so what's happened between Thane and Allison eh? ;D
ChocoResha chapter 7 . 9/20/2009
Aw, poor Nessa... I, uh, don't know what more to say, so I'll just stop here ;
ChocoResha chapter 6 . 9/20/2009
Hahaha, the office instant messaging really got me cracking up. I don't think I even have to tell you who I think it was. I just love Chad, don't you?
ChocoResha chapter 5 . 9/20/2009
Thane's friends seem awfully cool. Hah, oxymoron! Anyway. Nessa's family's so nice and so very caring ]
ChocoResha chapter 4 . 9/20/2009
Vince is such a butthead. Honestly! Nessa's an idiot for picking him of all people to date. There are plenty of more safe people out there! Vince's just plain blah. xD
ChocoResha chapter 3 . 9/20/2009
Yay, Chad! I was starting to mope at the fact that there was no Chad the whole chapter xD Nice end to the chapter you had written!
ChocoResha chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
Hey, that was an awesome first chapter! Totally captivated my interest :D Hot guys are always the greatest ;]
Aaerie chapter 11 . 9/19/2009
if u though this was goin 2 disapoint then im sorry but ur delusional lolz it was so wow im like wow im speechless
xInkMusique chapter 13 . 9/17/2009
I liked it, but I think that the ending was way too rushed
blurrylights chapter 11 . 9/15/2009
I thought this story was just so super cute...but I think the marriage proposal happened just a bit too fast. I had a great time reading it though! I can't wait to read the re-write. :)
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