Reviews for Drained
yanz chapter 1 . 10/22/2009
i love how you've captured this moment in so little words. great job.
FlawlesslyImperfect chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
I think this is great because it can be interpreted in many different ways. Love it.
Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
Hm...I really like this type of poems, the 'slice of life' poems. The punctuation is good but I think the first line should have a comma because I think it would flow even better (It's just my preference though).

I think this haiku is about:

a. an implied writer's block or,

b. we reach the peak of our topics that we'll just 'recycle' them over and over again.

I enjoyed this poem. Great job and keep it up!

angels know the rest chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
Reminds me of my relationship with a friend. I like it.
moonsliver86 chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
interesting. not much imagery but captures an interesting slice of reality. interesting.