Reviews for Untitled
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
Nice piece, liked it a lot!
Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
I'm not really sure of what to say about this haiku of yours. I seem to know what this is about but the fact that it's untitled made it so confusing to me. Although I'm wondering why this doesn't have a title.

The punctuation is perfect, as always. The hanging '...' is another reason why I seem so confused about this. The flow and word choices are really good too.

So what is this about?

a. Probably something to do with living with the same routine everyday in your life (Living a ritual) and doing the 'politically/everybody thinks' correct (doing what is expected)that you are left unable to do what you want/what you dream of doing (left unable to...) or...

b. I have nothing more to say because I'm making myself even more confused.

This will be going into my faves and I'll be pondering on this for a while. Keep it up!


P.S It's been a while since I've reviewed you, eh?
moonsliver86 chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
nice ending. good haiku.
angels know the rest chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
Very true. Nice work, especially the hanging "..." at the end.