Reviews for Open Your Eyes
CuriousContradiction chapter 1 . 7/28/2009
Great repetition. It set up this sort of mantra. Very cool.

Maybe you could work on not listing as much? Otherwise, good work. You have some interesting lines in here.
ocii chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
This is really good! I could feel what the character might've felt, and I could see what she/he saw... Honestly, though, if you hadn't made it that good, I would've been afraid of it... Very good though!

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