|Reviews for The Beholder|
| bookaddict27 chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
I really liked the balance between humor and emotions in this story. You kept it humorous, but at the same it has the ability to make you think. Nicely done!
| Let Them Eat Cake chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
That was very interesting. It had a very poetic movement with subtle, not necessarily "laugh-out-loud" humor, but delicately placed. Yet it still brings in human emotions and thoughts very explicitly with no tainting. The more I think about it, the more I appreciate this. I read that one comment that says that they don't exactly understand why this is "Humor;" it's just a different sense of humor that starts off jovially and then morphs into ironic humor. Great job! I liked this very much!
| ShockingReality chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
I really enjoyed reading it, although I'm not sure what's so funny about it. You've got great vocabulary range, and I liked reading your detailed descriptions so much that you're officially added to my favourite author's list. I could picture that girl's face SO clearly in my mind...
| Na chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
hm...it was as funny as I first thought, but it was still a good read.