Reviews for time will tell
Aurora Borealis - Polar Lights chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
Great work! I agree with SoL, you really should become an author.

Reading this, I was very much reminded of a fanfic I read lately, where a girl was beaten by her fiancée. I think, this poem captures so much of what was also displayed in the story.
Solstice Of Light chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
You capture beauty, paranoia and decadence beautifully.

You SHOULD become an author.

I'd buy your works :)

SoL
Her Wishing Well chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
This is beautiful and so sad. I love the lines:

'did your body shake in his embrace

did he leave that bruise that's on your face

did you know you'd have to lie when you came home'

A really powerful poem, well done.
Ashelin chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
Oh, that had a slightly sad tone to it, but there is also hope. I could definitely relate to some parts of this poem. I liked it a lot. Good job.