|Reviews for The Polygamist|
| YFIQ chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
Sounds like one of those anime in which several girls would chase the protagonist.
The story's interesting and I like it.
By the way, thanks for the reviews, I appreciate it!
| Frayling0 chapter 1 . 10/2/2010
Hm this was certainly experimental, but I enjoyed it. You built up to that ending, and it definitely came with a punch (of the surprise variety heh). Flawless grammar and spelling wise, I enjoyed the crisp, succinct style of writing as opposed to my flowery and horrendous writing haha! Good work! ~ Luke
| HoodedStellaish chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
First off, I did not expect that ending at all. And I enjoyed this. Really, I did. You did a very good job describing the scene, but I think you could lengthen your sentences a bit.
| BlaznFangurl chapter 1 . 5/5/2010
UM, well it was written nicely. I am not into polagamy, or marrage period, but it wasn't gross or displeasing, or anything like that so it was nice and simple :)Just a young girl's opinion
| LadyRini478 chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
This is very good, and what I liked about it was that there was "fluff" in it, the story got right down to what I wanted to know. Of course, you didn't elaborate anything further after they undressed. *sighs* What a cliffhanger! Anyway, write the next chapter soon!